The Idea of an Essay, Volume 3

Analysis & Response 95 relate to the reader, and finally make logical conclusions to persuade and ultimately convince the reader. Saturated with over fifty references to historical figures and works of literature, ethos quickly rises to the surface of this article displaying the vast knowledge of Deresiewicz. This establishes his credibility and supplies his argument with historical depth, improving the article’s significance. An example of this can be seen in paragraph nine when he is examining how modernism has effected solitude. He lists thirteen different historical figures to complement his argument. It appears that Deresiewicz chooses an interesting tactic for presenting his references. A majority of his references are listed without much of an explanation, which seems to imply that he expects the reader to be familiar with these historical figures and works of literature. However, I believe that this is not the case. Deresiewicz did this for two reasons: First, he is observing solitude in history, so he can be brief because an explanation will distract the reader from his thesis. Second, he used these references as a way to encourage the reader to take the time to read about these prominent figures on their own. Not only do these historical references supply Deresiewicz with credibility, but they also are sufficient as backing for his claim. One of the most effective ways that Deresiewicz uses to demonstrate the neglect on solitude is his ability to move from deep concentrated thinking, to dramatic imagery. These strategically placed pathos arguments not only keep the argument applicable but also refrain the paper from sounding too scholarly and factual, intimidating the attention-deficient reader. For example, after Deresiewicz unfolds the historical background of solitude, he shifts towards the 70s and 80s and paints a picture of a dark world where corruption is increasing and morality is declining, captivating the reader’s attention (9). Deresiewicz not only captures his reader’s emotions, but he also paves the way for his qualifier in the following paragraph. His article now turns to a positive light: “Under those circumstances the internet arrived as an incalculable blessing” (10). Deresiewicz clearly states that the internet in and of itself is not bad, but the problem is how it is being used (10). After a limit of solitude has been enforced, he drives his point home when he rants a few rhetorical questions and states that visibility stemmed from technology is superficial, “Visibility secures our self-esteem,